Mar 19, 2015 - Communication    3 Comments

“Titus Andronicus is too violent to be taught at school” -against

i am against the statement that Titus Andronicus is too violent to be taught at school because it show how people were in past tense its a good thing to teach to each people in a way of showing how far violence in this play that people would enjoy reading a gory and violence theme to older people to show the way of historical theme can affect a theatre place and it is enjoying know about Shakespeare because he write different kind of work such as poem elegies and plays such as Julia’s ceaser and Romeo and Juliet . if you had read the play of Titus Andronicus you will know that it shows how a strong leader has been tested with his mental and physical stability. of how it can affect someone in a way of attacking people and going mad within the play.

i understand that you may believe that Titus Andronicus is too horrific to be taught at school but it show how revenge shows someone sorrow and would want revenge and it would affect a child’s understanding of this and would want to be violent themselves it would show how someone would get revenge from both side of the play the goth and Titus’s family would get revenge on each other and it would see a child’s view of this would be a good thing.

although you may think that the ideas of tamora the queen goth wants revenge in a the most dreadful way but it still shows how someone changes throughout the whole play from being a strong soldier of Rome to a sad lonely person which has a mental state of health after everything happened. You may think that the rape and sex is a bad way to teach a child but it shows to a extent of how lavinia got hurt in the worst way alive but hand cut off and tongue cut off it show to a extent of how the revenge affects people. Children will soon know what sex is and rape as they learn sex education so they would soon learn what it is and I actually think that it should be teached to children who have learned about sex education and they should be well be good manner and respectable to what happens in the play so I think that it should be teached to kid in yr.6 or over because it will teach children how someone changed the mental stability and physical strength from a beginning of a play towards the end in the play such as the main character TItus Andronicus and Tamora first Titus Andronicus is a tough warrior which would want to kill the goth and he captures Tamora and kills her son. she wanted revenge in the most obnoxious way and she grows stronger towards the end of the play and Titus Andronicus gos mental after he cut his hand and he gets his sons head and he evenges his son this shows to kids how someone changes through a tough time.

I have read Titus Andronicus myself and even when at a age of maturity I found it funny in some scenes and it shows how I feel as a towards this play. As well as it does take a lot of maturity to read and listen to the play getting told. even so if there is violence it show people should have a high maturity of learning Titus Andronicus. it would even be a great things to watch the play in globe theatre itself it will let them explore how old and wonderful it is and how it was in the past where and how it was showed to the viewer and how people found it different towards play now.

in my conclusion I think that Titus Andronicus should be taught in school but people may think that violence and gory should not but I think that it should be because it shows how someone changes the physical and mental stability throughout a play. last but not least it shows the play makes education a thing to learn about Shakespeare and the language he uses throughout his life and how he thought in writing his poems, plays, elegies and how is life created English to be a powerful resource to people life.

kaiyum rahman

 

3 Comments

  • Kaiyum, the content of your writing is strong. Therefore our first step toward unlocking your achievement badge will be to do with the grammar of your writing.

    Targets:

    1) You will need to punctuate you sentences to break up clauses. Read your work aloud and insert punctuation where you would naturally pause.

    2) You may need to rephrase your sentences once they are punctuated more heavily.

    3) You need to use capital letters more accurately.

    • I have now edited it and thank you for replying as I would need to fix my punctuation there for thanks for telling me to improve my work and thanks for commenting

  • Hi Kaiyum

    There are still some mistakes with punctuation and capital letters.

    You also need to think about how you might better persuade your reader through your language. For example, try using direct address (the pronoun ‘you’ is very useful).

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